This sample essay provides opportunites for students to identify feedback as "effective" or "ineffective" by engaging with the sample feedback dialogue associated with the essay. Supplement the modeling with
Sentence starters for peer review: Informative
as a starting point for practicing "Where to Next?" feedback in response to peers' work. While this worksheet provides an opportunity for guided instruction or modeling, it also gives students practice in how to respond to feedback if parts are vague or in need of clarification.
Pair the sample essay with the lesson presentation Part 3: Maximizing peer review and feedback loops for more guidance on how to use this worksheet for modeling and practice.
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Modeling "Where to Next?" feedback: Sample essay
A sample essay suitable for modeling and practicing giving and responding to feedback.